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Buying a Range of Household Goods

In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods (television, microwave, oven and rick cookers).

Is it a positive or negative development?

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WhyThis is aPositive or negative essay — it asks why a trend is happening and whether it is good or bad.

SoWe split the ideas intoPositive(why it is good)andNegative(why it is bad).

Positive

2 ideas

Negative

2 ideas

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Response 01

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Essay · 326 words · 4 paragraphs · 12 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The strongest aspect of this response is its clear, well-developed argument that presents a definite position while acknowledging the opposing environmental concerns. The main limitation is somewhat formulaic organisation, with ideas that, although logical, occasionally rely on generalised rather than sharply specific support.

TR

Task Response

The response addresses the task directly with a clear position that the trend is positive, develops main ideas on convenience and living standards, and concedes and rebuts the opposing environmental argument with relevant explanation.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas are organised logically across clear paragraphs with effective linking devices and a consistent, well-managed progression, though some transitions remain somewhat mechanical.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

The response uses a sufficient range of topic-related vocabulary such as 'environmental degradation', 'resource consumption' and 'domestic convenience' with generally good control, alongside some noticeable repetition of common phrases.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

The response demonstrates flexible use of complex structures, including concessive clauses, relative clauses and participle constructions, with consistently accurate sentence formation. Its grammatical control supports clear communication throughout.

8.0

What to work on next

Strengthen the supporting points with more concrete, specific examples and evidence rather than broadly stated generalisations.

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