The essay presents a clear, consistent position against a ban, with developed discussion of public fear and the value of crime reporting. Encouragement of criminals is addressed briefly through the safeguard against glorification, but its mechanism needs fuller explanation.
8.0Ideas progress logically across clearly organized paragraphs, with effective use of cohesive devices and referencing that keeps the message flowing throughout.
8.0Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as sensationalized coverage, public outcry, and glorification, and only rare minor slips.
8.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of complex sentence structures is used accurately, including concessive clauses, relative clauses and parallel lists. Grammar is consistently controlled; occasional opportunities to clarify reference concern precision rather than demonstrated grammatical errors.
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