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Arts Education in Primary Schools

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

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Response 01

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People assert that primary education needs equal weight for music and art and drama together with academic subjects. I agree with this statement because it identifies hidden talent and improves cognitive skills in children.

Response 02

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Some people believe that arts education is as significant as the study of other subjects, especially for primary students. I completely agree with this viewpoint because some educational content could be better illustrated in the forms of arts, and the study of arts is one key consideration which fosters all-rounded growth of young students.

Response 03

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Some people believe that arts-related subjects are as important as other school subjects, especially for primary school children. I totally agree with this statement because this can help children to discover their talents from an early age and can increase their confidence.

Response 04

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It is argued that the arts are just as valid as the other subjects, especially for primary school children. This essay agrees with that statement and will first discuss how some students flourish when studying music, art or drama and then talk about how maths and science are not crucial at primary level.

Response 05

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Music, art, and drama are deemed by some to be of the same importance as other subjects, particularly in primary school. This essay agrees with the statement because these subjects have a tremendous impact on students’ creativity at this age, and they might help some to choose a career path.

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