Advantages and Disadvantages of Modern Tourism

The response addresses all parts of the task, covers both advantages and disadvantages with relevant examples, and states a clear position that benefits outweigh drawbacks.

Ideas are logically organized into clear paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, though linking is at times mechanical.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and topic-appropriate, with some imprecise usage such as 'exhorting' and occasional awkward collocations.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, alongside noticeable errors in articles, word forms, and a stray character that do not impede meaning.

The response addresses both advantages and disadvantages and states a clear position that benefits outweigh drawbacks, though some supporting points, such as the cultural exchange example, are developed unevenly or tangentially.

Ideas are logically organised across clear paragraphs with effective linking devices, although progression within some paragraphs is occasionally loose rather than fully sustained.

There is a wide and flexible range of vocabulary with awareness of style, but some less common items are imprecise or awkward, including 'inturn', 'conveniences', 'expediencies' and the misspelt 'manoevure'.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, though errors such as 'Tourism industry is' and occasional article and phrasing slips appear without impeding meaning.

The response addresses all parts of the task with a clear, consistent position and relevant supporting detail, though some ideas remain repetitive rather than extended.

Progression is logical with clear paragraphing, but cohesion is partly mechanical and ideas about jobs and the economy are restated rather than advanced.

There is a sufficient range of topic-related vocabulary such as 'revenue', 'deleterious effects' and 'over-exploitation', with occasional awkward collocations like 'tourists' crowd'.

A variety of complex structures is used with good flexibility, and errors such as the subject-verb mismatch in 'benefits of tourism totally outweighs' are minor and rare.

The response addresses both parts of the task, maintains a clear position throughout, and supports main ideas with relevant examples, though ideas could be more fully extended and the response is slightly under the minimum length.

Ideas progress logically across clearly focused paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, although transitions are at times formulaic.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as cultural erosion and resource depletion, and only minor lapses in word choice.

A wide range of complex structures is used with strong control, including effective subordination and contrast, with errors rare and non-impeding.

The response addresses all parts of the task, presents a clear and consistent position that benefits outweigh drawbacks, and supports it with relevant extended examples, though development is at times more illustrative than deeply analytical.

Ideas are logically organised with clear paragraphing, effective referencing, and smooth progression from introduction to exemplification and conclusion.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as economic boost, diversified the economy, and lost sense of community, and only minor deviations from natural usage.

A wide range of complex structures is used with strong control, including accurate inversion, relative clauses, and present perfect forms, with errors being rare and insignificant.

The essay covers both advantages and disadvantages, presents a clear and consistently maintained position, and supports its main ideas with concrete examples, though development of the drawbacks is somewhat limited in range.

Ideas progress logically through a clear introduction, advantage paragraph, disadvantage paragraph, and conclusion, with cohesive devices and referencing used naturally and effectively throughout.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as 'marked increase', 'escalation in the local crime rate', and 'booming tourist industry', showing good awareness of style with only minimal lapses.

A wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and subordinate constructions, is used with strong accuracy and flexibility, with only rare minor slips that do not impede communication.