You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better.
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Response 01
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude for the valuable services that your restaurant provided on my birthday and made it memorable . All my friends were glad, and we hope to have the same treatment in the future.
Furthermore, I would like to thank all the staff, who did such a great arrangement. Without making the prior booking, you arranged the room with colourful lighting and balloons in the nick of time, which really brings appreciation, and it shows your good planning.
On the face of it, the food was luscious, and the presentation of it won my heart. Besides, the background music added more charm to my birthday party. It compelled us to dance. Also, the service of the staff was remarkable. They did not show a sign of delay in delivering any items to us. They were available at the beck and call of us. They make us feel proud of being the customers of your restaurant.
Suffice to say that everything was satisfactory except some food items, which were not available in your restaurant as some staff might be unfamiliar with some foreign food. In addition, usually, guests are requested to throw parties in the basement, which is rather suffocating. Although there is good ventilation and lighting system; however, it would be good if parties were arranged on the terrace, which presents a good scenic view.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Estimated band7.0
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Response 02
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Dear Sir,
Last week on Saturday night some friends and I had dinner in your restaurant to celebrate my birthday. I am writing to thank you for the great evening that we had.
All my friends remarked afterwards on the standard of the food and service that we received. All the food was very tasty and well presented. Our waiter, whose name was James, was fast and friendly and put with well with our bad jokes! The restaurant itself was warm and friendly and the atmosphere showed that all the diners there were enjoying their evening.
I would like though to suggest one improvement. One of my friends is a vegetarian and he felt that the choice for vegetarians was little small. If you could develop that, it would be a great advantage to your restaurant.
Once again I would like to thank you for my highly enjoyable birthday dinner.
Yours faithfully,
Rebecca Ahlinder
Estimated band7.0
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Response 03
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Dear sir/mam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude and contentment over the birthday event that I organized in your restaurant. My birthday is one of the most important occasions in my life that I expectantly wait for. I try to make it better year after year, and I am glad that I chose you this year.
All of my friends and family members were extremely elated with the arrangements made at your end, and it was the best party I have ever thrown on my birthday to this date. We loved the exquisite cuisines and especially, the thukpa, which I know you are proficient at. The ebullient atmosphere, zesty music and above all, the impeccable service of your staff was laudable.
However, I entreat you to have a variety in the beverages as that would add to your glory. Apart from that, thanks a lot for making it worth our while.
Yours faithfully,
Prakhar Panchbhaiya
Estimated band7.0
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Response 04
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Last week, I visited your restaurant with my friends to celebrate my birthday. I am writing to thank you for the delightful evening that we had.
We ordered a Chinese menu, and all my friends really liked the taste of the food and enjoyed it. We are also pleased with your staff friendly attitude. They were quick and attentive towards guests. The restaurant atmosphere was warm and pleasant. Live music was also remarkable because all the diners enjoyed their evening.
I believe you have a great place, and minor improvements would make it even better. A few of my friends are vegetarian, and they felt that you do not have more choices for vegetarian items. I hope you can add a few more things for vegetarian customers visiting your restaurant. Once again, thank you to you and your staff for making my birthday special & worth enjoying.
Your Faithfully,
Estimated band7.5
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Response 05
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am highly appreciative of your restaurant for the stellar service we received during my birthday party last week. We were pleased with the entire experience and the heartfelt arrangements.
The dishes were delectable and the assortment offered were succulent. The service was swift and polite, with the employees constantly making sure that we were comfortable. I admire the professionalism of the staff which was a factor that added to our pleasant experience.
Besides, the restaurant's atmosphere was a hospitable and calm place. The soothing ambiance made the place just right for the celebration of a great event. Even though the experience was unforgettable, there are two areas that could make the process even more enjoyable. One of which was introducing a reservation confirmation text and the other one was faster service time during peak hours.
I appreciate your contributions and would recommend your restaurant to others as well. I would love to come back soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Nadia Saraf
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