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Application Letter to Teach Children Language in Australia

4 Sample Responses · Bands 7.0–8.0

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………………… ,

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Response 01

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Dear Sir/Ma’am, I am writing to express my interest in the job opportunity I came across recently – teaching English to two children in Australia for a year. With my extensive experience as an English tutor and a deep passion for language education, I believe I am well-suited for this role.

Response 02

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Dear Mr and Mrs Henry, Recently, I came across an advertisement, in which you have asked for someone from Spain to teach the Spanish language to your two children. I have decided to apply for it because the opportunity would help me meet the cost of running an orphanage in a remote village of the war-torn country in Latin America while also exploring the beautiful continent of Australia at the same time. In my defence of availing this opportunity, I would like to say that I have a bubbly and easy-going personality which makes it rather easy for me to relate to the children. Besides, I have also done babysitting jobs to help a few relatives of mine to take care of their children and received some formal training on first-hand experience in childcare. I have also finished a diploma in teaching young children because I am passionate about teaching them. In addition to taking care of your children, I could also prepare some delicious Spanish food and delicacies on some special occasions to surprise your friends and families. I am hoping that you would offer me the job. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Maria Lucy

Response 03

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Dear Sir/Ma’am, I am writing to express my keen interest in the position of teaching English to a family of two children in Australia for a year. With my extensive background in language education and a deep-rooted passion for cultural exchange, I firmly believe that I possess the qualifications and enthusiasm to excel in this role.

Response 04

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Dear Mr. and Mrs. Thompson, I recently came across your advertisement seeking a tutor to teach your two children my native language - Spanish, and I would love to apply for the position.

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