Work Training Course Feedback Letter to Employer

You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course.

Write a letter to your employer. In your letter:

Remind your employer what the course was about

Explain why the course was useful to you in your work

Suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues

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Letter points: Work Training Course Feedback Letter to Employer

WhyThis is aSemi-formal letter — it asks you to cover every bullet point in a polite, semi-formal tone.

SoWe group the points under each bullet point of the task.

Remind your employer what the course was about

1 point

Explain why the course was useful to you in your work

3 points

Suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues

2 points

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Answer · 190 words · 8 paragraphs · 9 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band8.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The letter is a strong, professional response that fully covers all three bullet points with well-developed, relevant detail. Its main limitation is simply that the language, while accurate and well-controlled, occasionally relies on formulaic phrasing rather than more natural, precise expression.

TA

Task Achievement

The letter directly achieves its purpose with a suitable semi-formal register, covering all three bullets — course topic, workplace usefulness, and limited suitability for colleagues — with relevant, well-developed detail.

8.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Paragraphing is logical, each bullet is given its own clear paragraph, and cohesive devices such as 'However' and 'Additionally' are used naturally with no strain on the reader.

8.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, including items like 'task delegation', 'risk mitigation', and 'role-specific training programme', with only occasional reliance on formulaic word combinations.

7.5
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of structures, including relative clauses and complex condition-flavoured constructions, is used with generally strong accuracy; minor punctuation slips around the appositive dash do not impede meaning.

7.5

What to work on next

Vary sentence openings and phrasing to sound less formulaic and add one or two concrete examples of how a specific technique was applied at work.

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