Advising a Friend on University Accommodation

Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live.

Write an email to your friend. In your email • describe where you lived when you were a student at the university • recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation • warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your email as follows: Dear ……………,

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Letter points: Advising a Friend on University Accommodation

WhyThis is anInformal letter — it asks you to cover every bullet point in a friendly tone.

SoWe group the points under each bullet point of the task.

Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university

3 points

Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation

4 points

Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

4 points

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Response 01
Estimated band7.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The letter achieves a warm, appropriately informal tone and covers all three bullet points from the prompt, including a personal description of where the writer lived and practical warnings. The strongest aspect is the natural, friendly register with some precise vocabulary, while the main limitation is that the recommendation and warning sections are somewhat briefly developed and loosely connected.

TA

Task Achievement

All three prompt bullets are addressed in a consistently friendly register with relevant detail, though the advice and warning points are developed somewhat thinly, with the heating warning being the only caution offered.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter progresses logically through greeting, advice, personal experience, and warning, with cohesive devices used naturally, although some transitions like 'But, wherever' feel slightly informal and abrupt.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and mostly precise for the context, with natural collocations such as 'gain admission', 'post advertisements', and 'pricey', though occasionally wordy phrasing like 'having confidence in my advice in finding accommodation' reduces precision.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A good range of structures is used with generally strong control, including conditionals and relative clauses, with only minor punctuation and comma issues such as 'the flat or home, you decide to rent, has' affecting flow.

7.0

What to work on next

Develop each bullet point more fully with specific supporting detail, such as concrete steps for searching and more than one mistake to avoid.

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