Taking Selfies at Famous Places Instead of Looking

In this Suggested change: fast-paced erafast-paced era1fast forwarding era, many people visit historical places and Suggested change: take pictures of themselvestake pictures of themselves2click picture of them instead of enjoying the place. This essay will explain the reason behind this and Suggested change: explain the negative impactexplain the negative impact3explain their negative impact of this trend.

First of all, Suggested change: one reason is thatone reason is that4looking forward to reason, people are keen to express their happiness by Suggested change: showing picturesshowing pictures5showing picture of their visit to friends and family, which make them stand to the rich and adventurist society. Moreover, they had already seen those places Suggested change: online or on social mediaonline or on social media6online or social media so view has been stored in their mind, such things keep them away to entertain Suggested change: themselvesthemselves7their self by watching place but take their own picture. For example, Suggested change: I had seen Burj Khalifa on social mediaI had seen Burj Khalifa on social media8I had visited Burj Khalifa on social media so Suggested change: when the time camewhen the time came9when time come to visit Suggested change: rather thanrather than10rather then looking at the place Suggested change: I took a photographI took a photograph11I had click photograph to send my family to feel proud that I am standing in front of Suggested change: the world's tallest buildingthe world's tallest building12world tallest building.

Suggested change: On the dark sideOn the dark side13On dark side of this trend, Suggested change: firstlyfirstly14Firstly, those places Suggested change: lose their valuelose their value15loose their value and identity. Secondly, gifts from their ancestors Suggested change: have vanishedhave vanished16had been vanished from modern generations. For instance, I had visited red fort Suggested change: in 2024in 202417in 2024 year and click my own memory. Suggested change: However, whenHowever, when18however, when I show that to my parents Suggested change: I was askedI was asked19I have been asked about history of that fort and I was blank about it, afterwards my father told the whole story and I enjoyed.

In conclusion, visiting well-known places and creating their own memory has reason of stay away from rich society and social media exposure. Suggested change: This situation is keepingThis situation is keeping20While this situation keeping them away from their history and reducing identity of those places.