The response covers all three habits in all five cities with an accurate overview highlighting the cafe trend and Adelaide's exception, and the reported figures match the chart closely.
8.0Progression is logical with a clear overview, sequenced groupings, and effective referencing devices, though some body paragraphs read as somewhat mechanical city-by-city listing.
7.0Vocabulary is flexible and mostly precise, including useful comparisons such as "by a slight margin" and "nearly level". However, "most characteristic of" is vague for reporting a proportion, and "stocking up on" implies buying a supply that the survey does not establish.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of structures is used with strong accuracy, including complex comparative and appositive constructions, with only very minor awkwardness such as 'bought more instant coffee by a slight margin (50%)'.
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