University Students Doing Other Activities

Full time study in university is a great experience in life but Suggested change: at the same time,at the same time,1in parallel to that students become inactive in other activities such as working for their pocket money, sports, participating in debates and socialization. People differ in their opinion if students must engaged in other things or stay concentrated on their studies only. The discussion will be presented below, followed by my opinion.

Some people say that mere studying Suggested change: does not producedoes not produce2does not product Suggested change: well-rounded young peoplewell-rounded young people3an overall youth for a country. This way, students only Suggested change: acquire theoretical knowledgeacquire theoretical knowledge4earn theoretical knowledge -- not practical. For instance, students can be intelligent during their studies but at the same time when they Suggested change: enter the job marketenter the job market5come in the market to work n, they fail and cannot develop their confidence and work as brilliantly Suggested change: as they did at universityas they did at university6as they were in university. Hence, the best approach for them Suggested change: is to engage in various activitiesis to engage in various activities7need to be engaged here and there for practical experience.

On the other hand, others believe that building a better career is the foremost thing in today’s world. So, they are Suggested change: focused on their studiesfocused on their studies8targeted to their studies and gain as much knowledge as they can. Furthermore, if they are diverted from their studies, they will not be able to Suggested change: reach their goalsreach their goals9make their target.

Suggested change: From my point of viewFrom my point of view10In my point of view, there must be blending of full time education and extra activities. It refreshes students’ minds and provides more energy to concentrate on it. Moreover, Suggested change: in this wayin this way11by this way, they will learn how Suggested change: to interact withto interact with12to be mingled with other people in the society.

To summarize, it can be said that it is important to concentrate on study but on the other hand there must be something to keep them active Suggested change: and relaxed by being involvedand relaxed by being involved13and relaxed being involved in games, music, work and other extra activities.