University Students Doing Other Activities

Most of the students would benefit from some extra activities along with studies.Personally I believe that students should spend some time doing other activities such as sports.However,Suggested change: theirtheir1theeir main attention should be on education. To begin with, spending Suggested change: all their time studyingall their time studying2all the times with books can lead to many health problems. For example, spending most of the times with books can be stressful, which results in depression and Suggested change: in the worst-case scenario,in the worst-case scenario,3in worst case scenario suicide. Furthermore, students who spend more time with books are not active and usually they Suggested change: have a sedentary lifestylehave a sedentary lifestyle4have sedentary lifestyle, Suggested change: as a resultas a result5as result, students are at risk of being overweight.Simply,Suggested change: all these effectsall these effects6all these affect Suggested change: could result incould result in7could be result in long-term psychological problem and Suggested change: alsoalso8laso put students under pressure while studying.In addition,pupils do not learn social skills as not being able to spent time with friends or some events. In addition,allocating some time to other activities Suggested change: while studying haswhile studying has9while studying have some benefits.Suggested change: FirstlyFirstly10Firsly,Suggested change: Students get refreshedStudents get refreshed11Student get refreshed after these activities and they can concentrate easily.On the other hand Suggested change: students' brains get tiredstudents' brains get tired12students brain get tired if they study constantly.As a result, they feel tired and lack energy Suggested change: which makes it difficultwhich makes it difficult13which make difficult for them to concentrate all the time.I Suggested change: believebelieve14beielve that students who Suggested change: spendspend15spen more time with books gain good knowledge but to learn other skills, such as team work,they have to participate in Suggested change: activitiesactivities16activites like sports.On the other hand,giving some time to extra activities Suggested change: does notdoes not17doesnt mean that students have to focus on that but their main priority should be education. In ,Although It is necessary to give more time to books while studying,I Suggested change: believebelieve18beilve that students should take enough time out for other activities to avoid any impact on their health,future life and study.Also,students should avoid overindulgence in extra activities.