Police Budget Sources and Spending in Britain

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Cambridge IELTS 17 Academic Test 2 Writing Task 1 visual

Annotated response

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The table and pie charts offer a detailed overview of the of a specific British region’s police force .

the primary funding source was the national government, with salaries for officers and staff representing the most substantial expenditure. Despite a slight reduction in the percentage allocated to salaries, .

The national government the police force, contributing over half of the total budget in both 2017 (£175.5 million) and 2018 (£177.8 million). Local taxes contributed £91.2 million in 2017 and rose to £102.3 million in 2018, while from £38 million to £38.5 million.

salaries , decreasing from 75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018. Notably, technology funding experienced a significant surge, rising from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018. Allocations for buildings and transport remained stable at in both years.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The response demonstrates strong data selection and precise reporting, covering all sources and expenditure categories with accurate figures and a clear overview. The main limitation is its brevity, falling just short of the required length, which slightly restricts the depth of comparison and development.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

7.0

The response covers all key features with accurate figures from the table and charts and a clear overview of main trends, but the slightly under-length response omits the total budget figures and limits depth of comparison.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas are logically organised into clear paragraphs with effective cohesive devices such as 'On the whole' and 'Regarding expenditure', showing consistent progression throughout.

Lexical Resource

7.5

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, using phrases like 'pivotal role', 'marginal increase', and 'significant surge' with natural collocation and only minimal repetition.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.5

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex participial and comparative constructions, with errors rare and non-impeding.