Overconsumption of Natural Resources and Solutions

The response addresses both questions with a clear position, covering environmental and social problems and a mix of short-term and long-term solutions, though some ideas remain somewhat general in development.

Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs with effective use of cohesive devices, with only occasional slightly mechanical linking.

There is a good range of topic-specific vocabulary such as resource depletion, per-capita use and lean manufacturing, deployed with reasonable precision and awareness of style.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control. Errors include the missing possessive in 'the Earth environment', the countability pattern 'a series of damage', and the incomplete passive clause 'while consumers sensitized'.

The response addresses both questions directly, presents a clear position, and supports main ideas with explanation, though the discussion of some problems, especially deforestation, is less developed.

Ideas progress logically across well-organised paragraphs with appropriate cohesive devices, with only occasional slightly mechanical linking.

Vocabulary is sufficiently varied for the topic, including 'depleting' and 'contaminate', but 'reservation' is repeatedly used for resource supplies and some collocations, such as 'put their best effort to combat', are inaccurate.

A good range of structures is used with generally strong control, though occasional errors such as 'cause our living on the earth impossible' and tense choices slightly reduce precision.

The response fully addresses both parts of the question, presents a clear position, and supports main ideas with relevant examples, though development occasionally remains general rather than extended in depth.

Ideas are logically organized into clear paragraphs with effective progression and cohesive devices, though some linking is at times mechanical or predictable.

A good range of topic-related vocabulary and natural collocations is used with flexibility, with only occasional reliance on formulaic academic phrasing.

A wide range of complex sentence structures is used with strong control, and errors are rare and non-impeding.