Nutrients in Typical US Meals Pie Charts

4 Sample Responses · Bands 7.0–8.0

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Response 01

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The pie charts illustrate the ratio of sodium, saturated fats and added sugar in four average daily meals consumed by Americans. The percentages of these three nutrients in breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks that American citizens generally consume are given and they are detrimental for health if consumed plenty in quantity. Overall, dinners and lunches that the USA residents consume are sodium and saturated fats rich while their snacks have a high portion of added sugar. In details, USA citizens' sodium, sugar and saturated fats intake during the breakfast is comparatively lower, around 14-16% each time. Intake of these nutrients is considerably higher in food items they eat during lunch and dinner. The lunch they eat comprises of 29% sodium, 26% saturated fats and nearly 20% sugar. They consume much higher percentages of these nutrients, which are harmful to health when eaten too much, while they heave their dinner. Their intake of sodium, saturated fats and sugar during dinner are 43%, 37% and 23% respectively. Finally, the snacks they enjoy contain high sugar and fats, 42% and 21%, respectively, and the sugar intake in snacks is higher than that of dinner and lunch.

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Response 01
Estimated band7.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response selects broadly accurate figures, including the defensible approximation of nearly 20% for lunch’s 19% share of added sugar. It recognises the importance of dinner and snacks, but sometimes confuses intake shares with food composition. Language errors such as “heave their dinner” and the singular “intake” followed by “are” reduce precision, while the single paragraph weakens visual organisation.

TA

Task Achievement

The response covers all three charts with broadly accurate figures and identifies meals associated with high shares. However, the overview does not isolate the largest contributors clearly, and describing lunch as comprising nutrient percentages confuses intake shares with food composition.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

The report moves logically from an overview to meal-by-meal detail, but all nine sentences are presented in one paragraph. Separating the overview from the supporting figures would make the organisation clearer.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is generally adequate and topic-appropriate, but occasional awkward or imprecise expressions such as 'in details' and 'comprises of' limit flexibility.

6.5
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A variety of sentence structures is used with generally good control, though errors such as subject-verb agreement and awkward relative constructions are noticeable at times.

6.5

What to work on next

Refine phrasing and grammatical accuracy, replacing awkward expressions such as 'comprises of' and 'heave their dinner' with precise, natural alternatives.

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