金钱与人生幸福

The response addresses both questions directly, presents a clear position that money is not the main source of happiness, and develops each main idea with relevant explanation and examples.

Ideas are organised logically across clear paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices and generally smooth progression, though some linking is occasionally mechanical.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible with some precise and less common items such as 'financial prosperity' and 'state of mind', but occasional awkward or imprecise collocations reduce overall precision.

A good range of complex structures is used with general flexibility and accuracy. The incorrect verb pattern in “Happiness can not sustain” and occasional awkward constructions rarely impede meaning.

The response addresses both parts of the task directly, maintains a clear position throughout, and supports main ideas with relevant explanation and examples, though development remains somewhat generalized.

Ideas are logically organized with clear progression across well-managed paragraphs and a range of cohesive devices used appropriately, although transitions such as 'for example' and 'furthermore' are somewhat mechanical.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise for the topic, with natural collocations like 'financial stability' and 'sense of purpose', but it relies on some common formulations rather than less frequent, nuanced word choices.

Complex structures, including relative clauses, concession patterns and participial clauses, are used with good control, and sentences are generally error-free despite occasional stiffness.

Both questions are fully addressed with clear, extended ideas and relevant support, but the response ends without a conclusion, leaving the overall position less fully consolidated.

Ideas progress logically within and across paragraphs with effective use of linking devices, though the cohesion can feel formulaic and the abrupt ending weakens overall progression.

The vocabulary is wide, flexible, and largely natural, conveying precise meanings with only occasional over-elaborate or slightly forced word choices.

A wide range of complex structures is used with flexibility and strong control, with rare, minor slips that do not impede communication.