Task Achievement任务完成情况
The response generally addresses the requirements of the task. The format may be inappropriate in places.
作答总体上回应了任务的要求。格式在某些地方可能不恰当。
(Academic) Key features which are selected are not adequately covered. The recounting of detail is mainly mechanical. There may be no data to support the description.
(学术类)所选要点未得到到位的涵盖。细节的复述主要是机械的。可能没有数据来支撑描述。
(General Training) All bullet points are presented but one or more may not be adequately covered. The purpose may be unclear at times. The tone may be variable and sometimes inappropriate.
(培训类)所有提示点都有呈现,但可能有一个或多个未得到到位的涵盖。目的有时可能不清晰。语气可能多变,有时不恰当。
There may be a tendency to focus on details (without referring to the bigger picture).
可能倾向于关注细节(而不提及整体情况)。
The inclusion of irrelevant, inappropriate or inaccurate material in key areas detracts from the task achievement.
在关键部分加入不相关、不恰当或不准确的内容,有损任务完成情况。
There is limited detail when extending and illustrating the main points.
在展开和举例说明主要论点时,细节有限。
Coherence & Cohesion连贯与衔接
Organisation is evident but is not wholly logical and there may be a lack of overall progression. Nevertheless, there is a sense of underlying coherence to the response.
能看出组织结构,但并不完全合乎逻辑,可能缺乏整体推进。尽管如此,作答仍有一种内在的连贯感。
The relationship of ideas can be followed but the sentences are not fluently linked to each other.
观点之间的关系可以理解,但句子之间连接得不流畅。
There may be limited/overuse of cohesive devices with some inaccuracy.
衔接手段可能使用有限/过度,且有一些不准确之处。
The writing may be repetitive due to inadequate and/or inaccurate use of reference and substitution.
由于指代和替换使用不足和/或不准确,行文可能重复。
Lexical Resource词汇丰富度
The resource is limited but minimally adequate for the task.
词汇资源有限,但对该任务而言勉强够用。
Simple vocabulary may be used accurately but the range does not permit much variation in expression.
简单词汇可能使用准确,但词汇范围使表达无法有太多变化。
There may be frequent lapses in the appropriacy of word choice, and a lack of flexibility is apparent in frequent simplifications and/or repetitions.
用词的恰当性可能经常出现疏漏;经常出现的简化和/或重复明显表现出缺乏灵活性。
Errors in spelling and/or word formation may be noticeable and may cause some difficulty for the reader.
拼写和/或构词错误可能容易被注意到,并可能给读者造成一些困难。
Grammatical Range & Accuracy语法多样性与准确性
The range of structures is limited and rather repetitive.
结构范围有限,且相当重复。
Although complex sentences are attempted, they tend to be faulty, and the greatest accuracy is achieved on simple sentences.
虽然尝试使用复杂句,但往往有误,准确度最高的是简单句。
Grammatical errors may be frequent and cause some difficulty for the reader.
语法错误可能经常出现,并给读者造成一些困难。
Punctuation may be faulty.
标点可能有误。