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食物长途运输到消费者手中

Food Traveling Long Distances to Reach Consumers

Today, food travels thousands of miles from farms before it reaches consumers in urban areas.

Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative trend?

如今,食物从农场运到城市地区的消费者手中要行驶数千英里。

为什么会这样?这是积极的还是消极的趋势?

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写作思路:食物长途运输到消费者手中

为什么这是双问题类 ,要求你在一道题中回答两个不同的问题。

所以我们把思路分为问题 1(回答第一个问题)和问题 2(回答第二个问题)。

问题 1

4条思路

问题 2

5条思路

同一道题 · 不同范文

范文与批改

范文 01

必改建议

作文 · 315词 · 4段 · 14条批注

分数详情

范文 01
估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The response addresses both questions, explaining urban demand and improved distribution and taking a broadly negative position. It uses a wide academic vocabulary and varied complex sentences. However, the environmental argument needs a clearer link between long-distance transport and high-yield farming, and the conclusion could state the overall judgment more directly. A subject–verb agreement error and some imprecise references also need attention.

TR

任务回应

Both questions are addressed through urban demand, improved distribution and a broadly negative evaluation. The economic concern is relevant, but the link between food transport and high-yield farming needs explanation, and the final judgment remains conditional.

8.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Progression is logical with clear paragraph purposes and effective referencing, though a few transitions and referential links are slightly loose or overly compressed.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural academic collocations such as 'necessitating importation,' 'climatic and soil conditions,' and 'irreversible consequences.'

8.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, though errors such as 'the increased distance food travels are' and occasional awkward constructions are noticeable.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Explain how long-distance distribution creates the ecological risk you identify, then make your overall judgment explicit in the conclusion. Also check that the main verb agrees with the singular subject “distance”.

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实用词汇:食物长途运输到消费者手中

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句型:食物长途运输到消费者手中

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