The response gives a clear overview and reports accurate figures, including the 2013 exception for glass and the 2015 peaks. However, it adds unsupported detail about garden-waste composition, sometimes equates collection with recycling, and gives limited detail on the glass series.
7.0Information is logically sequenced by category with effective linking devices and a sound paragraph structure, though progression within paragraphs is at times slightly mechanical.
7.0Vocabulary is flexible enough for the task, with useful terms such as 'exceeded' and 'fluctuated'. Expressions such as 'gardening' for garden waste and 'the most amount' reduce precision, while 'tree clippings and shrubbery' introduces detail not supplied by the chart.
7.0A good range of structures is used, including inversion ('Only in 2013 did the glass waste...') and relative clauses. Grammar is generally accurate, but the comparison of a total weight with 'types of recycling' needs parallel quantity phrasing.
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