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某回收中心2011年至2015年的废物收集

Waste Collection by a Recycling Centre (2011–2015)

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图显示了2011年至2015年某回收中心的废物收集情况。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:某回收中心2011年至2015年的废物收集

为什么这是柱状图 ,要求你比较最重要的几个类别。

所以我们把要点分为概述(最大的差异或规律)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

概述

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要点

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估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The response presents a clear sequence from overview to supporting figures and identifies paper’s 2013 low. However, the overview understates the variation in total collection, which fell sharply in 2012 before rising to a peak in 2015. Garden waste is also mislabeled as plastic in the 2011 account, and the 2015 paper figure is exactly 70 tons. More precise overview wording and a specific comparison of the other materials would strengthen the report.

TA

任务完成情况

The response reports useful opening and closing figures and the paper low in 2013, but its overview incorrectly describes the yearly totals as fluctuating only slightly. It also mislabels garden waste as plastic in 2011 and puts the labelled 2015 paper value above 70 tons. The 2013 exception to paper’s usual lead would sharpen the overview.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically from an overview to detailed year-based descriptions, with cohesive devices such as 'meanwhile' and 'while' used naturally and without strain.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible for the task, with terms like 'fluctuated', 'hit the lowest point' and 'the opposite was true for', though occasional imprecise collocations such as figures 'witnessing' fluctuations appear.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

The response uses subordinate clauses and a with-construction to combine figures, with generally controlled past-tense reporting. The existential wording in the 2011 tin sentence is cumbersome and could be made clearer with a direct passive construction.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Check the overview against the chart: total collection fell sharply in 2012, then rose to a 2015 peak. Verify category labels and endpoints, especially garden waste in 2011 and paper at 70 tons in 2015.

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