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澳大利亚五个城市的交通方式使用情况

Transport Use in Five Australian Cities

The percentage of people using public transport and only using private cars in five cities in Australia from 2000 to 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

2000年至2010年澳大利亚五个城市中，使用公共交通的人和只使用私家车的人所占的百分比。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点：澳大利亚五个城市的交通方式使用情况

为什么这是折线图 ，要求你描述随时间变化的主要趋势和变化。

所以我们把要点分为概述（整个时期的主要趋势）和要点（值得描述的数据和对比）。

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估算分数6.5/ 9

总体评价

The response is well organised, with a relevant overview and controlled language. Its main limitation is the private-transport paragraph: Sydney and Melbourne are reversed, and Perth and Canberra are also assigned the wrong series. The public-transport account is mostly accurate, but its stated range for Melbourne misses the visible 2006 peak.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers both graphs and provides a relevant overview. Most public-transport details are accurate, but Melbourne’s stated range misses its 2006 peak. In the private-transport paragraph, Sydney and Melbourne are reversed, and the Perth and Canberra series are also misidentified.

5.0
CC

连贯与衔接

The response is logically organised with a clear overview, well-managed paragraphs, and a good range of cohesive devices used naturally.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is flexible for describing trends and comparisons, with phrases such as 'posting the highest figures', 'hovering between', and 'increased markedly' used effectively.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A range of structures, including complex sentences, participial phrases and clauses introduced by while and although, is used with accuracy and control.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Check each data point against both graphs carefully before writing, especially matching city names to the correct lines in the private transport chart.

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