英国警察经费的来源与支出

Police Budget Sources and Spending in Britain

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下面的表格和图表给出了英国某一地区2017年和2018年警察预算的信息。表格显示了资金的来源,图表显示了资金的分配方式。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:英国警察经费的来源与支出

为什么这是混合图 ,要求你把两张图中的主要规律联系起来。

所以我们把要点分为概述(每张图的要点)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

概述

3个要点

要点

7个要点

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估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The strongest aspect is the accurate, complete coverage of both visual sources, with all key figures correctly reported and meaningful comparisons drawn across the two years. The main limitation is somewhat formulaic linking and occasional mechanical use of connectors, which keeps the writing short of fully natural progression.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers all data from the table and both pie charts accurately, including totals, percentage shifts, and the unchanged buildings and transport share, with a clear overview of rising funding and shifting expenditure priorities.

8.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Information is logically grouped into sources and spending with a clear progression, though cohesion relies on somewhat mechanical connectors and repeated framing phrases.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is flexible and precise for describing change, with terms like 'substantial surge' and 'modest uptick', but some phrasing such as 'primary focus of the budget' is slightly imprecise for expenditure.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex sentences with participial and relative elements, with only rare minor awkwardness affecting an otherwise controlled grammatical performance.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Vary cohesive devices and integrate comparisons more naturally within sentences rather than relying on repeated connectors such as 'in contrast' and 'specifically'.

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