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2009年和2010年国际游客入境人数

International Visitor Arrivals in 2009 and 2010

The table shows the number of international visitor arrivals in nine countries and the percentage changes between 2009 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

该表显示了九个国家的国际游客入境人数,以及2009年至2010年间的百分比变化。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:2009年和2010年国际游客入境人数

为什么这是表格 ,要求你对关键数据进行归类和比较。

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估算分数8.0/ 9

总体评价

The response is well organised and fluent, and reports the included destinations' printed figures clearly. Its main content weaknesses are the omission of Hong Kong's sole decline and the overview's incorrect inclusion of unchanged France among destinations with increases. The established/emerging market labels are also unsupported. The introduction's count of nine matches the table's nine rows, despite the inconsistent image heading.

TA

任务完成情况

The response reports the included destinations' printed figures faithfully, but omits Hong Kong and its sole decline. The overview incorrectly groups unchanged France among destinations with modest increases and adds market classifications not supplied by the table. The introduction correctly counts nine data rows despite the image heading's reference to eight countries.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically from overview to detailed data, with well-managed sequencing and cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'In contrast', and 'At the lower end of the spectrum'.

8.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied and generally fluent, including 'trailed by', 'uptick' and 'surge'. However, 'established markets' and 'emerging destinations' impose classifications not supported by the table, and consistent use of 'arrivals' would preserve the statistical unit more precisely.

8.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of complex structures, including participial phrases and balanced contrasts, is used with consistent accuracy and punctuation control.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Add Hong Kong's sole decline to the overview and detail, remove France from the group showing increases, and compare destinations using observed changes rather than unsupported market labels.

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