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1992年至2002年某城市的家庭垃圾回收情况

Household Waste Recycled in One City 1992-2002

The chart below shows the percentage of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图显示了1992年至2002年某个城市各类家庭垃圾被回收利用的百分比。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。

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范文（1） 要点（7） 词汇（2） 句型（2）

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要点：1992年至2002年某城市的家庭垃圾回收情况

为什么这是柱状图 ，要求你比较最重要的几个类别。

所以我们把要点分为概述（最大的差异或规律）和要点（值得描述的数据和对比）。

概述

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作文 · 173词 · 4段 · 8条批注

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范文 01
估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The response covers all four materials, gives a clear overview and organises the details logically. Its main trends and rankings are largely accurate. However, describing cans as the largest portion of recycled waste confuses a recycling rate with a share of total recycled waste. The detail paragraph would also benefit from showing paper ahead of glass in 1997 and plastic remaining stable after 1997. The paper increase needs clearer units, not a claim that the increase was smaller.

TA

任务完成情况

The response presents a clear overview and covers all four materials with largely supported estimates. However, the opening detail sentence confuses the recycling rate for cans with their share of all recycled waste. The 1997 paper–glass ranking and plastic’s later plateau would improve the selection of detail.

8.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically from overview to detailed comparisons, with effective use of referencing and cohesive devices such as 'thereafter' and 'in contrast', though some linking is slightly mechanical.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied and effective for describing trends, including “registered”, “threefold”, “surged” and “recovered slightly”. Some expressions could be more precise: “the most recycled material” can suggest quantity rather than rate, and “over 20%” would communicate the absolute change more clearly in percentage points.

8.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A good range of structures is used, including participial and relative clauses, and grammatical accuracy is generally high. The wording “an increase to 12% in the recycling rate” is cumbersome rather than clearly ungrammatical; placing “the recycling rate for plastic” as the subject would make the sentence easier to process.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Describe percentages as recycling rates within each material, and distinguish percentage-point changes from relative growth. Add the 1997 paper–glass comparison and plastic’s subsequent plateau; use reasonable estimates where the chart has no printed values.

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实用词汇：1992年至2002年某城市的家庭垃圾回收情况

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句型：1992年至2002年某城市的家庭垃圾回收情况

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