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1993年与2003年欧盟进口服装每公里平均价格

EU Clothing Import Prices per Kilometre, 1993 and 2003

The bar chart shows the average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

该柱状图显示了1993年和2003年欧盟从六个不同国家进口服装的每公里平均价格。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:1993年与2003年欧盟进口服装每公里平均价格

为什么这是柱状图 ,要求你比较最重要的几个类别。

所以我们把要点分为概述(最大的差异或规律)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

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估算分数6.0/ 9

总体评价

The response has a clear structure, with an overview and separate detail paragraphs for each year. Its main weaknesses are inaccurate comparisons and trend claims: Japan is not among the cheapest suppliers in 2003, and prices did not rise in every country except Bangladesh. Several awkward expressions and tense errors also reduce precision.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers all six countries and includes an overview, but confuses lower prices within 1993 with decreases over time. Its 2003 account misstates the overall direction of change and reverses the relative prices of Japan and India. The overview also incorrectly presents Japan as low-priced relative to the other suppliers.

5.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Information is arranged in logical year-based paragraphs with a clear overview and linking devices, though connectors like 'Whereas' are used mechanically and slightly inappropriately at times.

6.0
LR

词汇丰富度

There is adequate vocabulary for describing prices, but choices such as “appropriately” instead of “approximately” and “goods which is being brought” instead of imported clothing reduce accuracy. “Increased by” also confuses final price levels with amounts of change.

6.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A mix of simple and complex structures is attempted, but errors in tense consistency, subject-verb agreement and relative clauses are noticeable, although the intended meaning generally remains clear.

6.0

下一步改进重点

Check the two bars for each country before describing changes. Distinguish lower prices within one year from a fall over time, and summarise which suppliers rose, fell or stayed unchanged.

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