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汽车制造商2006年至2010年分地区销量

Car Manufacturer Sales by Region 2006 to 2010

The chart below shows the percentage of a car manufacturer’s total sales in various regions from 2006 to 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图显示了2006年至2010年某汽车制造商在各个地区的总销量所占的百分比。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:汽车制造商2006年至2010年分地区销量

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所以我们把要点分为概述(最大的差异或规律)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

概述

3个要点

要点

6个要点

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估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The response is well organised and linguistically fluent, with a clear overview and effective comparisons across the whole period. Its main limitation is the systematic mislabelling of regions, so many reported figures are attributed to the wrong category and several stated values do not match the chart.

TA

任务完成情况

The response identifies the main trends and covers the full period, but repeatedly swaps North and South America: the 2006 shares are 30% and 11%, and the 2008 shares are 21% and 6%, respectively. It also places Asia’s overtaking of Europe in 2010, although the chart shows this occurred in 2009.

6.0
CC

连贯与衔接

The report progresses logically from an overview through two chronological detail sections. Existing line breaks mark these stages, although blank lines would separate them more clearly. Long sentences and the reversed former/latter reference sometimes make comparisons harder to follow.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

The response shows good lexical flexibility with phrases like 'near parity', 'overtaking', and 'a more than twofold rise', with only occasional awkwardness such as 'the dominant' and 'Similar changes, but to a great extent'.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used with generally good control, including complex sentences and participial phrases, though minor errors in agreement and article use occur.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Match every percentage to the chart legend, especially for North and South America, and check when Asia first overtakes Europe. Keep the measure as a share of the manufacturer’s sales.

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