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七个国家的平均退休年龄
Average Retirement Age in Seven Countries
The charts below show average age of men and women who retired from work in seven countries in 2004 and 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
下图显示了2004年和2008年七个国家男性和女性退出工作岗位的平均年龄。
请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。
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为什么这是柱状图 ,要求你比较最重要的几个类别。
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7个要点With regard to males, the countries with the oldest retirement age in 2004 were Sweden, the Netherlands and the UK, with 63.2, 62.5 and 62.4 years old, respectively.
在范文中定位 Following them were Denmark, Germany, Italy and France, with French men typically leaving the workforce around the youngest age of 58.5.
在范文中定位 Four years later, the average age at retirement slightly increased across all surveyed countries, except for Italy’s, which remained stable.
在范文中定位 There was no change in the rankings, while France continued to be the only country where males tended to retire before 60 years old.
在范文中定位 Over the chart for women, Sweden and the Netherlands appeared to record higher levels in 2004 than any other country did, with 62.8 and 62 years, respectively.
在范文中定位 Danish, Italian and French women’s age when they left the workforce was lower than 60, with France also witnessing the lowest data of 58.5 that year.
在范文中定位 By 2008, all countries experienced minor rises in the age at retirement, except Italy, whose figure decreased, and France, whose level stayed unchanged.
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both genders
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- 男女两性:男性和女性。Men and women.
Overall, men were generally older when they retired in all nations, and Swedish people recorded the highest age at retirement for both genders.
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