Plastic Pollution Damage and Potential Solutions

Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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It is irrefutable that plastic harms the environment to a great extent. Plastic pollutes , degrades the fertility of the soil, and the entire ecosystem. Recycling plastic and limiting its use while also introducing biodegradable alternatives to plastics are by far the most effective solutions to this problem.

The environmental damages caused by plastic are severe and often extreme. Plastic bags, bottles, packages, toys and many other materials made of plastic and water for hundreds of years as they are not biodegradable. the of soil and hamper the water flow in it. Thus it of the land. Moreover, plastic that reaches harms aquatic animals and coral reefs. Plastic pollution plays a considerable part in animal deaths. Today, plastic particles could be found in fishes, birds and other animals, and it disrupts the entire ecosystem.

However, the authorities concerned and can turn the tide and mend the damage done to the environment to a great extent. For that, they have to ensure that they both play their part efficiently. First, people have to take part in the plastic recycling process by putting plastic waste in a separate recycle bin. The authority has to make sure that all recyclable plastics are properly recycled and reused. To limit the use of plastic bags, people need to use bags made of biodegradable materials like jute fibre. They can start carrying their own instead of buying plastic water bottles. Reduction in consumption of plastic-made materials could contribute to a large extent in limiting the harms caused by plastic. Finally, the government can limit the use of plastic bags and bottles by imposing a hefty tax on such items.

In conclusion, plastic is severely detrimental to the environment and ecosystem. So for our own benefit, we all need to use as little plastic as possible while also recycling the used plastic.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response fully addresses both questions with a clear position, well-developed damage analysis, and concrete solutions for governments and individuals. Its strongest aspect is the flexible vocabulary and logical organization; the main limitation is occasional awkward collocation and minor grammatical slips that keep the language from being consistently precise.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.5

The response directly answers both questions, develops the damage and solutions paragraphs with relevant explanation, and presents a clear conclusion, though some solutions could be developed in slightly more depth.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas progress logically across clearly organized paragraphs with appropriate cohesive devices, though a few transitions such as 'For that' and 'spontaneously' are slightly mechanical or imprecise.

Lexical Resource

7.0

Vocabulary is sufficiently wide and mostly precise, including phrases like 'impair the breathability of soil' and 'imposing a hefty tax', with occasional unnatural collocations such as 'mass people' and 'mend the damage done to the environment'.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A good range of structures is used with generally accurate control, including relative clauses and modal constructions, despite minor slips such as comma misuse in 'Plastic materials, that get mixed with soil'.