Advantages and Disadvantages of Driverless Vehicles

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Driverless cars, thanks to the , are no longer fiction, but a reality, and it is expected that most vehicles will be autonomous in the future. Despite both benefits and demerits, that the advantages of driverless vehicles do not outweigh the disadvantages.

One of the major advantages of driverless vehicles is that they reduce the number of accidents on the road. Such cars provide better traffic efficiency since can travel efficiently at an optimized and safe distance from each other by communicating among themselves and by telling which routes to take. It reduces accidents and casualties to a great extent.

However, the systems or the technologies, used to operate driverless vehicles, can malfunction or stop working at any time, . an autonomous vehicle could actually put the passengers in more danger than if a human driver were driving it. Besides, self-driving cars lack the ability to and outcomes. For example, a situation with only two possible options: one is to veer to the left and strike a pedestrian, and the other one is to turn to the right and hit a tree, potentially injuring the passengers inside the vehicle. Now, since both options are undesirable, which option would the driverless car choose? The Moral Machine, developed by a group at MIT in the USA, is seeking to address this critical issue by collecting data on real-life people’s decisions, but broad differences amongst different groups of people, making it very difficult to programme any definitive answer for autonomous cars. Thus autonomous cars are good to have but are not great to ride in!

So, based on the discussion above, we can fairly conclude that the shortcomings of driverless automobiles outweigh their possible benefits.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response presents a clear position and develops the disadvantage argument effectively, supported by a vivid ethical dilemma example and reference to the MIT Moral Machine. The main limitations are that the advantage side is underdeveloped relative to the opposing view, and minor awkward phrasing occasionally weakens precision.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.0

The position is clear and consistently maintained, with a relevant advantage developed and a well-supported disadvantage argument including a concrete example, though the benefits side receives less development.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs with effective use of cohesive devices and referencing, despite a slightly abrupt shift from advantages to disadvantages.

Lexical Resource

7.0

Vocabulary is flexible and topic-appropriate, with items such as traffic efficiency, malfunction, and unfavourable scenarios used naturally, though occasional phrases like good to have but not great to ride in are more informal.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, including conditionals and relative clauses, with only minor errors in punctuation and phrasing that do not impede understanding.