Advantages and Disadvantages of Driverless Vehicles

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the current era, with the level of scientific advancement that has been achieved, technology has become a part of our existence and has eased many issues in our lives. This has led many people to think that all vehicles will be automated and will no longer require drivers in the decades. From my perspective, I think the advantages of driverless automobiles eclipse their drawbacks.

Firstly, will reduce the risk of accidents caused by drivers. The element of human error, which is responsible for 94% of all accidents, will be . People will be able to travel safely even when they are too or otherwise unfit to drive. Additionally, senior citizens and others who may have problems with driving can commute safely in driverless cars. It will allow people to the time spent commuting in other ways. Lastly, research has suggested that the introduction of automated vehicles on roads will reduce energy expenditure and pollution, which indicates that they will be a much more environmentally friendly .

However, there are some disadvantages to ushering in driverless modes of transport. Firstly, it will eliminate the jobs of several drivers whose livelihoods are directly contingent on them driving vehicles. Some people may also struggle with comprehending the technological aspects of automated transportation which may lead them to be fearful of such vehicles. Lastly, the costs involved in driverless conveyances may not be affordable, inaccessible to several people.

Thus, in conclusion, it can be said that while automated transportation may have a few shortcomings, its beneficial aspects largely overshadow them, making driverless vehicles a welcome technological innovation for the future.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response presents a clear position with well-organised, developed arguments on both sides of the driverless vehicle debate. Its strongest aspect is the precise, wide-ranging vocabulary, while the main limitation is that supporting ideas sometimes remain briefly asserted rather than fully elaborated.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.0

The response directly answers the question with a consistent position, covers multiple relevant advantages and disadvantages, and reaches a clear conclusion, though some points are supported more by assertion than extended development.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas progress logically through well-managed paragraphs with effective cohesive devices, although linking words such as 'Firstly' are used somewhat mechanically and a few points are under-expanded.

Lexical Resource

7.5

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural use of less common items like 'contingent on', 'eclipse', and 'usher in', and only occasional slightly forced or imprecise word choices.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A wide range of complex sentence structures is used with good control and frequent error-free sentences, with only minor slips in phrasing or article use that do not impede communication.