Choosing University Subjects: Personal Interest vs Useful Fields

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is an ongoing debate about whether university students should have complete freedom in choosing their courses or if they should be limited to fields with clear future benefits, such as science and technology. I believe that focusing on practical subjects is more beneficial for both individuals and society. This essay will examine both perspectives before presenting my viewpoint.

Primarily, supporters of academic freedom argue that forcing students to study specific subjects can be counterproductive. They opine that not every student has an aptitude for science and technology, and compelling them to follow such paths could lead to dissatisfaction and underperformance. Furthermore, creative fields such as music, design, and philosophy contribute significantly to society. For example, the entertainment industry generates billions of dollars annually and employs millions worldwide. If universities only focused on STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) subjects, essential aspects of human culture and expression would diminish.

However, prioritizing science and technology in higher education , leading to better career prospects. In today’s world, automation and artificial intelligence are rapidly replacing traditional jobs, making technical expertise more important than ever. To exemplify, countries that invest heavily in STEM education, such as South Korea, have seen remarkable advancements in innovation and economic stability. Additionally, many industries, including healthcare and environmental science, rely on technological progress to address global challenges such as climate change and pandemics.

To conclude, while freedom of choice in education nurtures creativity and diversity, in my opinion, prioritizing subjects with clear economic and technological benefits is more practical in today’s fast-paced world. Therefore, universities should encourage students to pursue STEM-related fields while still offering opportunities for those passionate about other disciplines.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

The essay develops both perspectives with relevant examples and uses fluent, varied language. Its final recommendation prioritises STEM while preserving other choices. Explaining this distinction more explicitly would clarify how the opinion answers the proposal to allow only useful subjects. Broad claims about technical education and economic stability would also benefit from more precise explanation.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

8.0

Both views receive relevant support, including aptitude and cultural contributions for free choice, and employment and innovation for technical subjects. The final recommendation preserves other disciplines, but the distinction between prioritising STEM and allowing only STEM should be stated more explicitly.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas are logically organised across clear paragraphs with effective cohesive devices and a sensible progression, though some linking is slightly mechanical, such as formulaic transitions like 'To conclude' and 'To exemplify'.

Lexical Resource

8.0

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural academic phrasing such as 'aptitude', 'counterproductive', and 'economic stability', and only minor instances of less idiomatic expression like 'They opine'.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0

Conditional sentences, relative clauses and other complex structures are generally accurate and controlled. The indirect-question clause 'if they should be limited' is grammatical. Sentences remain clear despite their length, with few evident errors.