Letter to a Magazine About an Influential Book

A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to a call for submissions on the subject of books that have influenced us. I would like to mention Jack Kerouac’s classic road novel, On the Road , which shaped my life like no other.

In case you have not read it, On the Road is the tale of one man’s adventures crossing the United States in the late 1940s. It is a frenetic and exciting journey, but also fraught with troubles. It tends to excite in young people a passion for travel, and I was no different. As a young man, I read this book and immediately wanted to take off for my own voyages in my own country, and since then I have been constantly in love with life on the road.

For more than a half-century, this novel has shaped the lives of countless people in it will continue to do so for decades to come. It has inspired with its notions of freedom and enthusiasm, and I think that those readers of yours should seek it out and give it a chance.

David Wills

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

The letter fully accomplishes its purpose, covering all three bullet points with a clear, consistently appropriate register and well-developed detail about the book and its influence. The strongest aspect is the fluent, natural language and confident range of vocabulary, while the main limitation is that the influence on the writer and the appeal to other readers, though addressed, could be developed with slightly more specific personal detail.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

8.0

The letter directly addresses the editor, covers all three bullets from the prompt with a suitable semi-formal tone, and develops each point with relevant detail such as the novel's plot and its lasting cultural reach.

Coherence and Cohesion

8.0

Ideas progress logically from purpose to description to wider influence, with well-managed paragraphing and cohesive devices used naturally throughout.

Lexical Resource

8.0

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, including natural collocations such as frenetic and exciting journey, fraught with troubles, and notions of freedom, with only negligible slips in spacing.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0

A wide range of structures is used with flexibility and accuracy, including complex and conditional forms, and errors are rare and non-impeding.