Porth Harbour in 2000 and Today Map

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Cambridge IELTS 19 Academic Test 2 Writing Task 1 visual

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The two maps illustrate the changes that have occurred in Porth Harbour between 2000 and the present day.

In 2000, the harbour was relatively simple, with basic facilities including two car parks, showers and toilets, a marina for private yachts, and areas designated for fishing boats and passenger ferries. There was also a dock, a lifeboat station, a disused castle, and a

In contrast, the current map shows significant development and modernization. Notably, the northern car park and adjacent showers and toilets have been removed to make space for cafes and shops, which have been added to enhance the The southern car park and facilities remain unchanged. Additionally, the has been slightly relocated to the north to accommodate the new cafes and shops.

is , accompanied by a newly established private beach for hotel guests. This indicates an effort to attract more tourists and provide exclusive amenities. The marina, dock, passenger ferries, and lifeboat station remain in their original positions,

Overall, the reflect a shift towards tourism and leisure, with new amenities such as cafes, shops, and a hotel, enhancing the area’s attractiveness to visitors while maintaining its original maritime functions.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response is well organised with a clear overview and fluent, varied language, which is its strongest aspect. Its main limitation is a series of spatial inaccuracies, such as the claim that a car park and showers were removed for the cafés and shops, whereas those facilities remain and the fishing boats and marina actually swapped positions.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

6.0

The response covers the main changes and gives a clear overview, but several details are inaccurate against the maps, including the removal of a car park and showers for the cafés and shops, the hotel being described as near a castle that no longer appears, and the failure to note that the fishing boats and marina exchanged positions.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas progress logically through a past-to-present structure with effective linking devices such as 'In contrast', 'Notably', and 'Additionally', giving a clear and consistent progression throughout.

Lexical Resource

7.0

Vocabulary is flexible and appropriate for map description, with precise items like 'relocated', 'amenities', 'modernization', and 'designated', used naturally with only minor looseness.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex relative and participial constructions such as 'accompanied by a newly established private beach', with only occasional minor slips that do not impede meaning.