Ethanol Biofuel Production Process

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Cambridge IELTS 19 Academic Test 3 Writing Task 1 visual

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The diagram illustrates the process by which ethanol, a type of biofuel, is produced from plant-based materials.

Overall, the production of ethanol involves a circular sequence beginning with the growth of plants and ending with ethanol being used as fuel in various modes of transportation. While carbon dioxide is emitted during the process, it is also absorbed at the start, making it a relatively sustainable cycle.

through photosynthesis . Once mature, these crops are harvested and taken to a pre-processing facility where they are . During this stage, the cellulose content of the plant matter is extracted, which serves as the key raw material for the next step.

In the subsequent processing phase, cellulose is converted into sugars, . This fermentation process results in the production of ethanol. Finally, the ethanol is distributed and utilized as a fuel for vehicles such as cars, trucks, and . While these vehicles release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, it is offset to some extent by the CO₂ absorbed during the initial plant growth phase.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The response covers all stages of the process accurately and in sequence, with a clear overview of the cyclical, sustainable nature of ethanol production. Its strongest aspect is the fluent, well-controlled language; the main limitation is a slightly interpretive claim about carbon offsetting that goes beyond what the diagram explicitly shows.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

7.5

The response presents a clear overview of the circular process and recounts all key stages—growth, harvesting, pre-processing, cellulose extraction, processing into sugars, fermentation with microbes, and fuel use—in the correct order with mostly accurate detail, though the claim that emissions are offset is an interpretation not explicitly stated in the diagram.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.5

The response is logically organised with clear staging, a range of cohesive devices such as 'to begin with' and 'in the subsequent processing phase', and smooth progression throughout.

Lexical Resource

7.5

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, using appropriate process and scientific terms like 'photosynthesis', 'cellulose', 'fermented', and 'utilized', with only minor unnatural phrasing such as 'broken down into smaller parts'.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.5

A wide range of structures is used, including passive voice, relative clauses, and complex sentences, all controlled with only occasional minor slips such as the spacing error after 'photosynthesis'.