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青年失业的问题与对策

Youth Unemployment Problems and Solutions

In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs.

What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

在许多国家，越来越多的年轻人离开学校后却找不到工作。

你认为青年失业给个人和社会造成了哪些问题？应该采取哪些措施来降低年轻人的失业率？

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写作思路：青年失业的问题与对策

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所以我们把思路分为原因与问题（起因或会出现的问题）和解决办法（如何解决）。

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作文 · 337词 · 5段 · 32条批注

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估算分数6.5/ 9

总体评价

The response covers the problems of youth unemployment and proposes several relevant measures, including business loans and overseas employment. However, depression is mentioned briefly, the social-effects paragraph repeats the crime argument, and the measures need fuller explanation. Frequent grammatical and collocational errors reduce precision, although the main message remains understandable. The discussion also concentrates heavily on graduates rather than the wider group of young school leavers.

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任务回应

Both parts are addressed through relevant problems and measures, but depression is briefly stated, crime is repeated, and the loan and overseas-employment proposals need more explanation. The focus on graduates also narrows the discussion of young school leavers.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Paragraphing is logical and progression broadly clear, but some cohesive devices like 'Again' are used mechanically and links between ideas are occasionally weak.

6.0
LR

词汇丰富度

There is adequate range of less common vocabulary such as 'dejected' and 'heinous', though awkward collocations like 'ethical disorders' and errors like 'unemployment young' reduce precision.

6.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A variety of structures is attempted, but frequent article, agreement, and tense errors, such as 'the percentage... are more than anytime', slightly obscure meaning at times.

6.0

下一步改进重点

Revise sentences for accurate verb forms, articles, and collocations, particularly in the opening and concluding paragraphs.

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