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The response directly answers the outweigh question with a clear position, covers both sides, and develops each main idea with relevant explanation and a concrete courier example, though the development occasionally remains generic.

Paragraphing is logical with clear progression from drawbacks to benefits to conclusion, and cohesive devices are used effectively, though some linking is mechanical and formulaic.

There is a good range of topic-specific vocabulary used naturally, including collocations like mitigating environmental pollution and logistical challenges, with only minor occasional inappropriacy.

Relative clauses, modal verbs and participial constructions show a varied grammatical range with generally good control. The “By limiting” opening attaches loosely to “there is”, and the final relative clause about a bicycle has an unclear reference.

The response addresses all parts of the task, states a clear position that disadvantages outweigh advantages, and develops main ideas with relevant explanation, though some points are extended through restatement rather than new content.

Paragraphing is logical and cohesive devices are used effectively to sequence advantages and disadvantages, although occasional overuse of linkers and repetitive referencing slightly reduce the range of cohesion.

Vocabulary is generally flexible and precise, with good use of topic-related terms such as respiratory health and road congestion, but frequent repetition of phrases like vehicle-free days and fewer vehicles limits lexical variety.

A range of complex structures, including relative clauses, participial phrases and causal clauses, is generally well controlled. Most sentences are accurate; occasional phrasing can be made clearer, but there is no clear pattern of article errors in the supplied response.

The response directly answers the question with a clear position, addresses both disadvantages and advantages, and develops main ideas with examples, though some evidence is generalized rather than specific.

Ideas progress logically from acknowledged drawbacks to outweighing benefits, with effective paragraphing and cohesive devices, although a few transitions lean on formulaic phrasing.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise with natural collocation and some sophisticated phrasing, though occasional expressions are somewhat flowery or imprecise.

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally strong control, and errors are rare and non-impeding.

The response addresses all parts of the task with a clear position that disadvantages are outweighed by benefits, and ideas are developed with explanation and examples, though the backpacker example is somewhat tangential and the economic argument is underdeveloped.

The argument moves from drawbacks to benefits and a conclusion, with clear linking expressions. Existing line breaks mark several stages, but the tourist example is separated from the inconvenience it illustrates, and the health topic sentence is placed before the break that introduces its supporting explanation.

Vocabulary is wide, including topic-specific expressions such as carbon footprints, sedentary lifestyle and exhaust fumes. Precision is less consistent in “feasible drawback”, the economic use of “lower demands” and the vague reference “owning such means”.

A wide range of complex structures is used with mostly accurate control, including conditionals, relative clauses, and participial phrases, but slips such as applying vehicle-free campaigns are, capitalization of By, and punctuation lapses show errors are not consistently rare.

The essay fully answers the question with a clear, consistent position, well-developed main ideas, and relevant examples, though the development of some points remains somewhat brief.

Paragraphing is logical and cohesive devices are used naturally, producing clear progression throughout, with only occasional slightly awkward linking such as in the final business example.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations like measurable drop, urban chaos, and short-lived, and only minor imprecision.

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control. The commuter list has an ambiguous grouping, while the final business example becomes awkward through a vague present-tense aside.