学校应教传统学科还是就业技能

The position is clearly stated, consistently maintained, and each main idea is supported with relevant explanation and examples, though some points remain generalized rather than fully extended.

Ideas are logically sequenced across clear paragraphs with effective use of cohesive devices, though linking is at times mechanical and the final point of the third paragraph sits loosely in its paragraph.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise for the topic, with some natural collocations, but repetition of key phrases such as 'job-related skills' and 'more employable' limits the range.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, though occasional dangling constructions, such as 'By equipping students with practical skills, they become', recur without impeding meaning.

The response addresses all parts of the task with a clear position throughout, and main ideas are developed and supported with relevant explanation and examples, though some arguments could be extended further.

Ideas progress logically across clear paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, and the argument is easy to follow despite occasional slightly loose referencing.

There is a good range of vocabulary with some flexibility and less common items, though occasional imprecise or erroneous expressions slightly reduce precision.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, and most sentences are error-free, with only minor slips affecting accuracy.

The response presents a consistent case for traditional subjects and develops three relevant ideas with examples. Some examples remain general, and the position could address the relative allocation of teaching time more explicitly.

Ideas progress logically through clearly signposted paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices, though some linking is mechanical and repetitive.

Vocabulary is generally precise and sufficiently flexible for the topic, with expressions such as “well-rounded education” and “historical context”. However, “prerequisites” overstates the career-preparation claim, and repeated broad phrasing sometimes limits specificity.

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, and errors are minor and non-impeding, though sentence patterns are somewhat uniform.

The response addresses all parts of the task with a clear position maintained throughout, and main ideas are developed with relevant examples, though the second body paragraph is less fully extended than the first.

Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, although the link and development within the third paragraph are comparatively thin.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, with natural academic collocations such as 'fosters critical thinking' and 'contextualize contemporary issues', with only occasional slightly informal or imprecise choices.

A variety of complex structures is used with good control, including relative clauses and participial phrases. Some coordination could be more balanced, particularly the placement of “not only” before the paired verb phrases.