The response directly addresses the extent-of-agreement question with a clear, consistent position, develops main ideas on both sides, and supports them with relevant examples, though development remains somewhat general.
7.0Ideas progress logically through clear paragraphing and cohesive devices such as 'First', 'However', and 'In conclusion', with only slightly mechanical sequencing at times.
7.0Vocabulary is varied and generally precise, with topic-specific expressions such as 'cognitive agility' and 'shorter attention spans'. Occasional imprecision, particularly 'somehow true', and compressed combinations such as 'acquire broader knowledge and vocabulary' reduce naturalness.
7.0A range of complex structures, including concessive clauses, relative clauses and participial clauses, is used with generally strong control. Sentences remain clear despite their length, and grammatical accuracy supports the argument throughout.
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