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研究家族史还是关注当代与后代

Researching Family History vs Present and Future Generations

In many parts of the world, people do research on their family history. Some people believe that finding out about previous generations is a useful thing to do. However, others believe that it is better to focus on present and future generations.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

在世界许多地方,人们会研究自己的家族史。有些人认为,了解前几代人是一件有用的事。然而,另一些人则认为,更好的做法是关注当代人和后代。

请讨论这两种观点,并给出你的看法。

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写作思路:研究家族史还是关注当代与后代

为什么这是讨论类 ,要求你讨论两种对立的观点,并给出自己的看法。

所以我们把思路分为第一种观点(支持第一种观点)和第二种观点(支持第二种观点)。

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第二种观点

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总体评价

The response discusses both views and consistently supports balancing family-history research with attention to present and future generations. Its paragraph structure is clear and its complex language is generally well controlled. Development remains abstract: the identity benefit needs illustration, the link between research and resistance to change needs explanation, and the proposed balance needs a clearer practical basis.

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任务回应

The response addresses all parts of the task, discusses both views with relevant, extended explanations, and states a clear and consistent position, though ideas could be supported with more specific examples for a fully extended treatment.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically across well-structured paragraphs, and cohesive devices are used naturally and flexibly to guide the reader throughout.

8.0
LR

词汇丰富度

There is a sufficient range of vocabulary with some precise and sophisticated phrasing, though some word choices are mildly formulaic and the range is not consistently flexible.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

Complex sentences are generally controlled and accurate, including subordinate clauses and participial constructions. An explicit human subject would clarify the sentence about investing time, and the repeated “while” clauses in the conclusion could be streamlined.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Strengthen each main idea with a specific, concrete example to give the argument more depth and persuasiveness.

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