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手机和电脑是否损害面对面交流
Do Phones and Computers Harm Face-to-Face Communication
More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
越来越多的人使用手机和电脑进行交流。因此，人们正在失去面对面彼此交流的能力。
你在多大程度上同意或不同意？
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写作思路：手机和电脑是否损害面对面交流
为什么这是观点类 ，要求你判断是否同意题目中的说法。
所以我们把思路分为同意的理由（支持该说法）和不同意的理由（反对该说法）。
不同意的理由
3条思路They intend to hold face-to-face group meetings, in which they can communicate with multiple participants effectively by seeing one another's faces and emotions directly.
在范文中定位 In face-to-face communication, they can decide when to express their personal views or pause to listen, by observing the non-verbal cues of other speakers.
在范文中定位 Meanwhile, communication is an integral part of special experiences, such as attending friends' gatherings or birthday parties of family members, in which they can convey feelings by words and build a bond with others
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communication skills
- 释义
- 沟通能力：分享想法和感受并理解他人所需的能力。The abilities needed to share ideas and feelings and understand other people.
On the other hand, electronic means of communication may not pose a threat to all communication skills, because people prefer face-to-face communication on many occasions.
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show empathy
- 释义
- 表现共情：表明你理解别人的感受。Show that you understand how another person feels.
Mobile phone and computer users are possibly not able to detect the emotions of other people in a conversation and show empathy.
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body language
- 释义
- 肢体语言：表现一个人的感受或含义的身体动作和姿势。Body movements and positions that show how someone feels or what they mean.
When talking to others on the phone or computer, they rely on verbal messages or emoji, rather than paying attention to the moods of other people, which can be deduced by analysing facial expressions, gestures, tones and body language in face-to-face communication.
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constructive conversation
- 释义
- 建设性对话：帮助人们更好地理解事物或朝着解决办法努力的交谈。A talk that helps people understand something better or work towards a solution.
Understanding the emotions of other people is important because it can affect whether we can interpret all messages correctly, conduct a constructive conversation and even develop a relationship with others.
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develop a relationship
- 释义
- 建立关系：随着时间推移与他人建立联系。Build a connection with another person over time.
Understanding the emotions of other people is important because it can affect whether we can interpret all messages correctly, conduct a constructive conversation and even develop a relationship with others.
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