The response addresses the question with a qualified position and develops arguments about social equity and sustainability. However, the reference to entire populations broadens the proposal beyond those unable to pay, and the proposed balance needs a concrete safeguard.
8.0Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs, with cohesive devices and referencing used flexibly and naturally throughout.
8.0Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with sophisticated collocations such as 'cornerstone for poverty reduction' and 'culture of dependency' used with only rare minor awkwardness.
8.0A wide range of complex structures, including concessive and relative clauses and participial phrases, is used accurately and flexibly, with only occasional lapses in reference consistency.
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