经济增长、世界贫困与环境

Both views are discussed and the introduction clearly supports stopping growth. The environmental case is much fuller; the national-income measures are relevant to growth but do not explain how gains reach people experiencing poverty, and hunger receives little development.

The introduction states a position and the body separates the two views, followed by a conclusion. Within this clear overall structure, long sentences and conflicting relationships sometimes obscure progression, especially the claims about a dip in development and diminishing water scarcity.

A wide range of less common vocabulary is attempted, but frequent misuse such as 'lacerate the poverty line', 'steadfast the essence' and 'endangered quotations' reduces precision and sometimes obscures meaning.

Complex structures are attempted throughout, but the missing verb in “some people steadfast” and the nonparallel phrase “the improvisation and revamping the ailing lifestyle” weaken control. Meaning usually remains recoverable, though several long constructions are difficult to follow.

The response discusses the benefits and environmental costs of growth and offers a clear sustainable-development position. Examples are relevant, but it does not fully examine why growth is the only solution or why it must stop.

Ideas progress logically across well-structured paragraphs with consistent linking devices, though cohesion is occasionally formulaic.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and topic-appropriate, including phrases like 'depletion of natural resources' and 'environmental sustainability', with only minor repetition of key terms.

A range of complex structures is used with good control, and errors are rare and non-impeding.

The response discusses economic benefits and environmental harms and states a preference for growth. However, restricting activities does not fully represent stopping growth, and the exclusive claim and final green-policy recommendation need clearer support.

Ideas progress through clearly signposted introduction, environmental discussion, economic discussion and conclusion sections. The final recommendation for green practices needs a clearer logical bridge from the preceding examples.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise for the topic, with good collocations such as environmental degradation, food scarcity, and lifting people out of poverty.

A wide range of sentence structures is used with good control, and errors are minor and non-impeding.

Both sides and a sustainable-growth opinion are presented with relevant examples. However, the discussion does not fully examine why growth is the only solution or must stop, and the rebuttal conflates stopping growth with stopping all economic activity.

Ideas progress logically with effective paragraphing and cohesive devices, though linking is occasionally mechanical and somewhat predictable.

Vocabulary is flexible and generally precise for the topic, with appropriate collocations, but phrasing is sometimes formulaic rather than natural or sophisticated.

Complex clauses and varied sentence structures are generally controlled well. The passive “are rapidly being depleted” would make the resources’ role in the extraction process clearer.

Both views are discussed with relevant examples, but the position shifts from complete agreement with ending growth to stopping only unsustainable growth. The historical rebuttal and the final distinction between human needs and profits also need fuller explanation.

Ideas progress logically across clearly sequenced paragraphs with effective use of cohesive devices and referencing that rarely attract attention.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, using natural topic-related collocations such as trickle down, unsustainable agricultural practices, and cash crops, with only minor stylistic unevenness.

A wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and conditionals, is used with flexibility and consistent accuracy.

Both views are discussed and the position against stopping growth is clear. Employment and agricultural investment provide relevant support, but the exclusive “only way” claim and the rationale for stopping growth need fuller explanation.

Ideas progress logically across clear paragraphs with effective linking devices, though occasional punctuation and referencing slips slightly disrupt cohesion.

Vocabulary is wide and precise, with natural collocations such as 'heavy toll', 'underprivileged backgrounds' and 'labour-intensive', and only minor inaccuracies.

A wide range of complex structures is used flexibly and accurately, with errors limited to occasional punctuation and minor slips that do not impede meaning.