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应限制非必要航班还是限制汽车使用

Discouraging Non-Essential Flights vs Limiting Car Use

One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than limit the use of cars.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

一次长途飞行消耗的燃料,相当于一辆汽车数年的用量,但两者造成的污染量相同。因此,有些人认为,我们应当抑制非必要的航班(如旅游出行),而不是限制汽车的使用。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

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总体评价

The response favours limiting car use while acknowledging the environmental cost of aviation. Its paragraphs follow a clear progression, and it uses varied vocabulary and complex sentences with generally good control. However, the flight-versus-driving example needs a consistent comparison basis, and the claims about atmospheric effects and technological progress need clearer support. Clarifying the qualification in 'partly disagree' and correcting awkward expressions would make the argument more precise.

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The response addresses the policy comparison and supports a preference for limiting car use. However, it gives little attention to why non-essential flights are specifically reducible, and the emissions and technology comparisons need clearer qualification. The extent of disagreement could also be stated more precisely.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas are logically organised across well-managed paragraphs with effective use of cohesive devices, though some linking phrases are slightly mechanical or formulaic.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is flexible and largely precise, using topic-appropriate terms like 'cumulative contribution' and 'transoceanic flight', with occasional lapses in precision such as 'gigantic amounts of emission'.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, though some sentences are awkward or contain minor errors that do not impede meaning.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Compare flight and car emissions on a consistent basis, explain or qualify the causal and technology claims, and specify why non-essential flights are reducible. Make the degree of disagreement explicit in both the introduction and conclusion.

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