照顾年长亲属时间不足的原因与对策

Both causes and solutions are addressed with relevant, if somewhat simple, ideas, but development remains limited and examples are thin, fitting a band 6 rather than a fully extended response.

Paragraphing is logical and linking devices such as 'to add to this' and 'for example' guide the reader, though cohesion is sometimes mechanical and progression within paragraphs is loose.

Vocabulary is adequate for the task with some appropriate collocations like 'busy work schedule' and 'fulfil the basic needs', but range is restricted and occasional imprecise choices such as 'huddle' occur.

There is a mix of simple and complex structures with mostly clear meaning, but errors in determiners and verb forms, awkward sentence construction, and punctuation and capitalisation problems limit accuracy. Examples include 'due to busy schedule', 'use to do' and the capitalised 'Are' within a sentence.