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买进口食品而不买本地食品

Buying Imported Food Instead of Local Food

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally.

Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

在许多国家,越来越多的人选择购买进口食品,而不是本地生产的食品。

人们为什么购买进口食品?可以采取哪些措施鼓励人们购买本地食品?

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写作思路:买进口食品而不买本地食品

为什么这是问题解决类 ,要求你指出原因或问题,并提出解决办法。

所以我们把思路分为原因与问题(起因或会出现的问题)和解决办法(如何解决)。

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估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The response clearly addresses both parts of the question, with a well-developed, well-illustrated explanation of why imported food is bought and a coherent proposal for encouraging local purchasing. Its strongest aspect is the relevant, concrete example of bananas; the main limitation is that the second question receives somewhat lighter development than the first, alongside a handful of minor language slips.

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任务回应

Both questions are answered with a clear main reason (cost) and a plausible solution (consumer education), supported by a relevant extended example, though the solutions section is developed less fully than the causes.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically across well-structured paragraphs with effective referencing and cohesive devices, with only occasional lapses such as an imprecise closing phrase.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, with useful topic language such as trade networks and counterintuitive. Minor weaknesses include changer for change and the vague expression want these goods in his life.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, including conditionals and relative clauses, with occasional errors that do not impede understanding.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Explain who would provide consumer education and how it would influence a purchase. Then address the cost barrier you identify, for example by considering an affordability measure alongside education.

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