给海滨酒店写信预订周末住宿

Letter to Book a Weekend at a Seaside Hotel

You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. In your letter say, when you will be arriving and leaving what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

你和家人打算在海滨酒店度过一个周末。

给酒店写一封信，以便作出安排。

在信中说明：

你们什么时候到达和离开

你们想要哪种类型的房间，并询问这个周末要花多少钱

询问酒店附近有哪些活动和名胜

范文（1） 书信要点（5） 词汇（6） 写作练习

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书信要点：给海滨酒店写信预订周末住宿

为什么这是正式书信 ，要求你用正式的语气回应每个提示点。

所以我们按题目列出的每个提示点整理要点。

When you will be arriving and leaving

1个要点

What type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost

2个要点

Inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

2个要点

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作文 · 125词 · 7段 · 10条批注

分数详情

范文 01
估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The strongest aspect is the letter's complete and well-organized coverage of all three bullet points with a consistently appropriate formal tone. The main limitation is that it falls 25 words short of the minimum length, leaving the bullet points only briefly developed rather than extended with detail.

TA

任务完成情况

The letter clearly states arrival and departure dates, requests the room type and cost including charges, and asks about nearby activities, with a suitable formal register, but the underlength response limits the development of each bullet point.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

The letter progresses logically through the three points with effective paragraphing and natural linking of questions and requests, with no coherence problems.

7.5
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is precise and appropriately formal for a hotel enquiry, showing some flexibility such as 'family-friendly excursions' and 'additional charges', though the range is somewhat conventional.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A good range of sentence structures, including polite indirect questions and conditionals, is used accurately with only minor mechanical lapses in punctuation spacing.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Expand each bullet point with additional relevant detail—such as preferences about the rooms, meal arrangements, or more specific questions about local attractions—to reach at least 150 words.

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实用词汇：给海滨酒店写信预订周末住宿

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第1部分

建议用时约 20 分钟，至少写 150 词。

词数：020:00 输入第一个词后开始计时