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欧洲某国每周人均食品消费量

Weekly European Food Consumption

The table below presents the food consumption per person weekly in a European country in 1992,2002, and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下表列出了1992,2002年和2012年某欧洲国家的人均每周食品消费量。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点：欧洲某国每周人均食品消费量

为什么这是表格 ，要求你对关键数据进行归类和比较。

所以我们把要点分为概述（表格中的主要规律）和要点（值得描述的数据和对比）。

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估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The response is well organised and covers all five food categories with accurate reported figures and a clear overview. It correctly identifies vegetables as the most consumed food and the net decline in meat consumption. Comparisons could be sharper, particularly the size of the increases in wheat and beans. Explicit dates for the meat figures and more direct phrasing would improve clarity. The response meets the minimum length, with only a few local language problems.

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任务完成情况

The response covers all five foods, gives an accurate overview of their net changes and reports the selected figures correctly. The 171-word response meets the minimum length. Clearer comparison of the sizes of the increases and explicit dates for the meat figures would strengthen the account; not every intermediate value needs to be listed.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Information is logically grouped by food type with clear progression and effective referencing, though transitions are somewhat mechanical in places.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied and generally appropriate for consumption trends. However, “were consumed under 1000 grams” needs a natural quantity phrase, and expressions such as “were included on a weekly basis in a person’s diet” could be more direct.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used with strong control, including accurate participle and passive constructions, and errors are rare and non-impeding.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Make the comparisons sharper by contrasting the increases in wheat and beans. Add dates to the meat figures, clarify that its decline was overall, and correct “those” to “that” and the quantity phrase after “consumed”.

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