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英国移民的停留时长与移民原因

UK Migration Length of Stay and Reasons

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下面的曲线图和图表给出了英国移民的信息。曲线图显示了2000年至2008年间的移民打算在英国停留多长时间，饼图则显示了2008年的移民原因。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。

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范文（1） 要点（8） 词汇（2）

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要点：英国移民的停留时长与移民原因

为什么这是混合图 ，要求你把两张图中的主要规律联系起来。

所以我们把要点分为概述（每张图的要点）和要点（值得描述的数据和对比）。

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范文 01
估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The response addresses both visuals in a logical structure, identifies the leading categories and reports the pie-chart percentages correctly. However, its claim of fluctuation in the four-or-more-year group contradicts the flat line, and the two-to-four-year range overlooks the higher figure in 2007. The overview would benefit from a trend contrast. More precise category labels and range constructions would also strengthen the report.

TA

任务完成情况

Both visuals are addressed, with the main categories identified and all pie-chart percentages reported correctly. However, the flat four-or-more-year series is described as fluctuating, the two-to-four-year range misses the rise to about 70,000 in 2007, and the overview gives rankings without a main trend contrast.

8.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs with effective use of cohesive devices such as 'in contrast', 'in addition', and 'lastly', though some referencing and sequencing are slightly mechanical.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

The response uses a good range of topic-appropriate vocabulary, including "substantial increase" and "prominent reasons". Precision is reduced by "delineates that", the mixed construction "between ... to ...", and the unsupported description of the "No reason stated" group as "non-respondents".

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used flexibly and accurately, including complex sentences with participial phrases and relative-style modification, with only rare minor errors that do not impede meaning.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Check each trend and category against the visual: describe the four-or-more-year line as unchanged, include the rise to about 70,000 in 2007 for two-to-four-year stays, and retain the label "No reason stated". Use "between X and Y" for ranges and add the main trend contrast to the overview.

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