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1990年至2005年英国空气污染物来源

UK Air Pollutant Sources 1990–2005

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图显示了1990年至2005年英国空气污染物的不同来源。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。

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范文（1） 要点（7） 词汇（3）

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要点：1990年至2005年英国空气污染物来源

为什么这是折线图 ，要求你描述随时间变化的主要趋势和变化。

所以我们把要点分为概述（整个时期的主要趋势）和要点（值得描述的数据和对比）。

概述

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范文 01
估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The response has a clear overview and logically grouped details, covering all four series with relevant comparisons. However, it reports the final total as about 5 million tonnes, whereas the chart ends just above 3, and understates the household decline as minimal. Transport is broadly stable, though its small fluctuations could be expressed more precisely. Vocabulary and sentence structures show range, but several measurement and comparison phrases are awkward.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers all four series and gives a useful overview, but the final total is reported as about 5 million tonnes instead of just over 3. It also understates the substantial proportional fall in household emissions. Transport is broadly stable, with small fluctuations that could be described more precisely.

6.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas are logically sequenced from overview to detail, with cohesive devices such as 'whereas', 'in comparison', and 'in contrast' used naturally, though a few references are slightly loose.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

The response uses a varied range of trend vocabulary, including “downtrend” and “plunge”, but precision is uneven. “Sources” sometimes substitutes for emission quantities, “six times less than the number of Industry” is awkward, and “minimally” mischaracterises the household decline.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex relative and contrastive clauses, with errors rare and not impeding meaning.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Check the total’s 2005 endpoint, then describe the household fall relative to its starting level. Use “broadly stable” for transport and compare emissions directly rather than using “six times less”.

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实用词汇：1990年至2005年英国空气污染物来源

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