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四国临时外籍劳工人数表

Temporary Migrant Workers in Four Countries Table

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下表显示了2003年和2006年四个国家的临时外籍劳工人数,以及2006年这些国家每1000人中的此类劳工人数。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:四国临时外籍劳工人数表

为什么这是表格 ,要求你对关键数据进行归类和比较。

所以我们把要点分为概述(表格中的主要规律)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

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估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The response selects the main rankings clearly and organises its discussion logically into totals and population-based rates. Most comparisons are supported by the table, including the UK’s approximate doubling. The main limitations are missing 2003 baselines and wording that implies arrivals or an all-time record. Adding selected starting values and keeping claims within the two observed years would make the report more precise.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers all four countries and gives a clear overview of both data dimensions. It omits the 2003 starting figures, so changes are only partly quantified, and “all-time high” goes beyond the two years shown. The UK’s reported doubling is a close approximation of its rise from 137,000 to 266,000.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically through an overview, then absolute numbers, then ratios, with cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Regarding changes', and 'Concerning' used naturally and without strain.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied, including “albeit less pronounced” and “standing below 5”. Precision is reduced by “influx”, which implies arrivals rather than worker totals, and by the unsupported “all-time high”. The figures 678.000 and 266.000 also need consistent English thousands notation.

8.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures, including inverted comparisons like 'in first place was New Zealand' and participial constructions, is used accurately with only rare, non-impeding errors.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Add selected 2003 baselines to quantify the changes, describe worker totals rather than arrivals, and replace “all-time high” with a comparison limited to the years shown.

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